Great Work!
As a huge fan of the original Heroes Rise trilogy, I was going into this hoping that the things I loved about the first 3 still remained in this edition. Im happy to say that this is the case in a majority of cases. My only two complaints, minor as they may be, regard the characters and the political nature of the story. Admittedly, I felt like the characters couldve benefited from a tad more development, but, assuming there are more works, I can imagine this will be addressed later. Secondly, the very specific angle this story drives the reader in, while being inextricably linked to the way the character is intended to develop, seems a bit heavy-handed at times, and in doing so pulls a little bit from the freedom I saw in the original 3. All in all, however, Im thoroughly impressed, and I hope to see more stories soon!
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Hero Project Redemption Season, v1.0.2