An Okay spin off

Let me get this out of the way, the first series was way better. This entry failed to make me connect to my character as the first one did. When in the first one I truly felt like I was my super hero, this ones writing very much feels like reading a "choose your own adventure " book. I know that essentially this is a choose your own adventure book but the first series did a great job of it feeling like I was the character, every thing that happened to them happen to me,compared to this one where it seemed like it was happening to a character, it lacked the ability to make me connect. The worse part is the ending, this story literally had no real climactic moment and as soon as you begin to build tension and get to that point I get "Next: Epilogue".

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